The Writing Workshop's purpose is to help Brazilian students of English to become better writters.
segunda-feira, 28 de setembro de 2015
Welcome, class! This is our new space to create, share and improve our skills abilities. I'm willing to see lots of writings and lots of suggestions which will help each other's work. So, let's do it?
"It was such a better world when I ruled it." The other day I had an interesting dream, but a dream that seemed very real. I dreamed that I ruled the world and it was a satisfying task. In my dream people were good, ethical, honest, educated, organized, happy, in short, people do not seem human. Then, because of all the qualities of people, the world was very different. In all places, there was no traffic jams, the streets were very clean, the houses were simple and no had walls, the gardens were beautiful, flowering and well maintained, and there was a lot of solidarity among the people, who helped in what was needed. Children played quietly in public parks without fear of evil people or being kidnapped. At the same time, in commerce, the prices of products and services were just and correct. The public services met the needs of people. All things considered, there was not poverty and people were happy. To summarize, I was charmed with the world, but suddenly I woke up and realized that it was just a dream. Thus, when I was really awake thought: It was such a better world when I ruled it.
My backpacking trip I went camping in the Pantanal, but I lost myself ... I could see a lot of animals, large animals and crazy ... but this place was very beautiful and the people were very polite. I bumped into a woman and asked her to help me because she knew my language. But she said that couldn’t help myself ... Ohh Jesus!
I thought: I What I’ll do? what will happen if I don’t get help? I couldn’t spend a lot of money for nothing. On the other hand, I had an idea to use my guitar at the music's festival in the nearest town ... I would be able sing and still win ... My backpacking trip was perfect.
Dear teacher,
ResponderExcluirIt's very important, but very difficult... Ohhh my God!
Thank you anyway! I'll try to participate.
Hugs
My first text:
ResponderExcluir"It was such a better world when I ruled it."
The other day I had an interesting dream, but a dream that seemed very real.
I dreamed that I ruled the world and it was a satisfying task.
In my dream people were good, ethical, honest, educated, organized, happy, in short, people do not seem human.
Then, because of all the qualities of people, the world was very different. In all places, there was no traffic jams, the streets were very clean, the houses were simple and no had walls, the gardens were beautiful, flowering and well maintained, and there was a lot of solidarity among the people, who helped in what was needed. Children played quietly in public parks without fear of evil people or being kidnapped.
At the same time, in commerce, the prices of products and services were just and correct. The public services met the needs of people. All things considered, there was not poverty and people were happy.
To summarize, I was charmed with the world, but suddenly I woke up and realized that it was just a dream. Thus, when I was really awake thought: It was such a better world when I ruled it.
Hey, Gisele! Thank you for your participation. I'm going to put your text as a posto and not as a comment, ok? xoxo
ResponderExcluirOk teacher,
ResponderExcluirSoon as I can, I put the text of the last class.
Thank you!
Xoxo 😊😉
This is the text of the last class:
ResponderExcluirMy backpacking trip
I went camping in the Pantanal, but I lost myself ... I could see a lot of animals, large animals and crazy ... but this place was very beautiful and the people were very polite. I bumped into a woman and asked her to help me because she knew my language. But she said that couldn’t help myself ... Ohh Jesus!
I thought: I What I’ll do? what will happen if I don’t get help?
I couldn’t spend a lot of money for nothing. On the other hand, I had an idea to use my guitar at the music's festival in the nearest town ... I would be able sing and still win ... My backpacking trip was perfect.